I am working through my fears, however, and have a rough draft of a blurb completed. It needs some work, and some love, and better words, and everything else--but it's done. The rough draft, that is. Want to see it? I posted my blurb on my facebook page. I'd love to know what you think. Be honest.I would love to get some feedback. Thanks for stopping by and...
Happy Reading.
~ Jamie
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UPDATE 9/25/12
I am posting my latest version below so it's easier for everyone to see. Please let me know your thoughts; it's a tremendous help. If you want to see my original rough draft, that's still on my facebook author page. I know it's a short blurb. Personally, I get turned away by long, synopsis type descriptions on the back cover--I never read through all of them. My goal is to draw readers in quickly with some of the voice and give a hint of the mystery behind the book. Thanks again for any comments or feedback.
Rhiannon thought the worst part of her life was over—she was
wrong.
She lost
everything last season; her rights in the Fae, her passion, and her love. Still
grappling with the loss of her fiancé, and determined to solve the mystery
behind his death, Rhiannon wants nothing more than forgiveness from the Fae she
betrayed. But a raging fire threatens to destroy her village and the bandit
responsible for her pain has escaped—and he’s coming after her.
Will she redeem
the mistakes of her past, or will everything she’s known and has left to love
be consumed by rising flames?