tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5762160106914649794.post9081848186635169846..comments2022-03-22T15:50:10.800-06:00Comments on Scribbled Notes: Another Type of ContestJamie McHenryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17844129434598954840noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5762160106914649794.post-81601636051532040222011-04-03T00:12:44.748-06:002011-04-03T00:12:44.748-06:00Everyone was wonderful. Thanks for the comments. G...Everyone was wonderful. Thanks for the comments. Good luck to you all who are entering the contest. I just uploaded my entry. It's been fun!Jamie McHenryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17844129434598954840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5762160106914649794.post-34670155919571279302011-04-02T23:20:10.269-06:002011-04-02T23:20:10.269-06:00Faerie and romance--what could be better. Great p...Faerie and romance--what could be better. Great pitch and sounds like you've got a wonderful story.Julie Daineshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08350205936357263571noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5762160106914649794.post-56825081638971812052011-04-02T18:33:17.150-06:002011-04-02T18:33:17.150-06:00I love faire stories also. You could have also use...I love faire stories also. You could have also used "the fae" life ... Good conflict. Makes me want more and isn't that the purpose. Good luck :)fOIS In The Cityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06347958777030988677noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5762160106914649794.post-42810216178674340062011-04-02T07:25:32.865-06:002011-04-02T07:25:32.865-06:00Hello! I agree with the others - #3 sounds polishe...Hello! I agree with the others - #3 sounds polished and it's got everything you need.blankenship.louisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05541461775158369620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5762160106914649794.post-7091830542716476932011-04-02T06:24:00.303-06:002011-04-02T06:24:00.303-06:00I liked the last one best.I liked the last one best.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11622191037152999869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5762160106914649794.post-51556265566410472272011-04-01T22:02:01.967-06:002011-04-01T22:02:01.967-06:00I really like it! The only thing I want to know is...I really like it! The only thing I want to know is her name. With the character limit I understand though. Great job! Good luck in the contest!! :)Jamie Corriganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11837319723353425561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5762160106914649794.post-85852933661807757172011-04-01T21:32:05.104-06:002011-04-01T21:32:05.104-06:00These are all fantastic suggestions! Thank you. I&...These are all fantastic suggestions! Thank you. I'm going to do my best to incorporate a bit of all of them. I'll update the post with my newest "revision". Keep the feedback/critiques coming.Jamie McHenryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17844129434598954840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5762160106914649794.post-9973824067630723752011-04-01T21:17:27.597-06:002011-04-01T21:17:27.597-06:00It works. You have the MC, the problem, and the st...It works. You have the MC, the problem, and the stakes. Good job :)Touch of Inkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13551995840395409781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5762160106914649794.post-33777017489462978772011-04-01T19:17:15.793-06:002011-04-01T19:17:15.793-06:00Very intriguing. Strong conflict. Cery well done.Very intriguing. Strong conflict. Cery well done.Crystal Collierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03912469552483168148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5762160106914649794.post-16359379554133029542011-04-01T17:33:08.449-06:002011-04-01T17:33:08.449-06:00The idea sounds interesting! I'd like to know ...The idea sounds interesting! I'd like to know what her name is and a little bit about why she has to choose. Did something take her boyfriend? <br /><br />I'd definitely like to read more about it!J E Fritzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03372746219262163566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5762160106914649794.post-14569814196634463992011-04-01T16:56:21.082-06:002011-04-01T16:56:21.082-06:00Is this the Faerie's boyfriend? As in:
When a ...Is this the Faerie's boyfriend? As in:<br />When a Faerie's boyfriend dissapears, her search for answers forces a choice between the life she loves and the life he could lose.<br /><br />Best of luck!Kaleenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03104611823742775404noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5762160106914649794.post-30753133220052339982011-04-01T16:16:14.604-06:002011-04-01T16:16:14.604-06:00take it as a compliment that people want more deta...take it as a compliment that people want more details and i am one of them! i would like to know the faeries name thoughdouglas esperhttp://douglasesper.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5762160106914649794.post-27272463845892669752011-04-01T15:05:25.347-06:002011-04-01T15:05:25.347-06:00I’m assuming Faerie is trying to encourage her ‘hu...I’m assuming Faerie is trying to encourage her ‘human’ boyfriend to cross into her special world – one where he will never be able to return to the life he was born into. I want to read the whole story.<br /><br />Perhaps write it with boyfriend's name...<br /><br />When [boyfriend’s name] disappears, a Faerie’s search for answers forces her to choose between the life she loves and the life [boyfriend’s name] could lose.junenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5762160106914649794.post-45856199885210741272011-04-01T12:35:51.639-06:002011-04-01T12:35:51.639-06:00I'd like to know why he disappeared and why hi...I'd like to know why he disappeared and why his life is at risk. <br /><br /> <a href="http://blkosiner.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow"> Brandi Kosiner</a>brandileigh2003https://www.blogger.com/profile/01669251993917961293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5762160106914649794.post-17847517740432004482011-04-01T11:49:13.190-06:002011-04-01T11:49:13.190-06:00Always a fan of fairy stories, but what makes this...Always a fan of fairy stories, but what makes this unique? And what exactly is the life she loves and the life she'll lose? <br /><br />Like:<br /><br />When X's boyfriend is kidnapped by trolls, she must venture out of the safety of the fairy realm to save him. Or lose her crown in the fairy court in order to go looking for him etc...Kimberlee Turleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04695299361596799423noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5762160106914649794.post-33413616216724524012011-04-01T11:10:46.261-06:002011-04-01T11:10:46.261-06:00OMG! Love it! I would so read this.
bethfred.comOMG! Love it! I would so read this.<br /><a rel="nofollow">bethfred.com</a>Bethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09962862566388212238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5762160106914649794.post-57915007025331355972011-04-01T10:08:15.127-06:002011-04-01T10:08:15.127-06:00I love anything to do with faeries, but I'm co...I love anything to do with faeries, but I'm confused. Who is the faerie? Her or the boyfriend?Lori M. Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04858438789496971734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5762160106914649794.post-65694694660013668192011-04-01T09:49:43.520-06:002011-04-01T09:49:43.520-06:00I like this, but I'm curious why he disappears...I like this, but I'm curious why he disappears? And what life could he lose?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17876772923733290496noreply@blogger.com